Personal Narrative

Writing is a very challenging task for me, but for some reason the personal narrative came easy to me. I actually enjoyed the assignment because I know my story better than anyone else's. When you put the criteria up on the board for the personal narrative, I instantly knew what I wanted to talk about. I hold my essay topic very close to my heart, and could probably write more than four to five pages on it. My topic makes me who I am today, so I hope you enjoy reading it. I tried to use a lot of detail, but one of my concerns is that I did to much "tell" and not enough "show." However, my main concern is that my writing is not at the level it should be. My English teacher last year only made us write four papers the whole entire year. As a result, I do not have much practice. I will be looking forward to reading your constructive criticism so that I can improve my personal narrative.